Update

As we haven't posted for a while I thought I'd post a few screen shots of the filming and editing we've done so far on Final cut express software.

Medium shot of Andrew at the table

Close up of Andrew writing in the diary

These are some of the screen shots from Andrew's study room. This is the scene where he is writing in his diary and narrating the first killing.
Below are screen shots of the second killing. These shots are from a park in Thurnscoe.

Establishing shot of location 

Similar shot to first - After killing James Jones walking off

James Jones being beaten to death

James Jones walking through the park medium shot

Editing of the film

Editing in Final Cut Express.